Wednesday, March 20, 2013

Hump Day Hook #8


Currently Reading:  Finished Closing Costs last night and was a little disappointed by the time jumps and a crucial point to the plot.  I can understand her fear, but jeez!  Why hold someone at arm's length for nine years?  I guess there are some extremely stubborn women out there.  Now on to Cinderella:  Demon Tale by Kerrianne Coombs.    I won this in a contest last month, so thought I'd give it a try.


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This is from my zombie story.  Enjoy:)

 “Assistance needed at 2600 Mulberry…officer down.  Repeat, officer down.  2600 Mulberry.”
            
Cam looked at Wade.  “Isn’t that the hospital?”
            
Their captain opened his office door.  “Record, you and McPhearson go and assist if needed at Union Hospital.  Their security guard is down and so is the first unit which responded.  Something fishy’s going on over there.”
           
  “On our way.”  Cam saved his file and activated his screen saver.  He made sure he had ample ammunition and noticed Wade checking his supply too.  They returned to their car and drove toward the hospital.
           
  “Unit 42, proceed with caution; repeat, caution.  Large crowd reported in parking lot.”
           
  “Roger that.” Cam replaced the microphone.  “What the hell is going on?”
           
  “Almost reminds me of the Twilight Zone.  Do you suppose we need the riot gear?”


Happy Birthday to my Spousal Unit of nearly 22 years:)  He's the Big 5-9!!!

8 comments:

Tamara Monteau said...

Oooh. Sounds cool!

Sabrina Devonshire said...

Nice action scene. It really grabbed me.

Sandra Sookoo said...

Oooh, nice snippet :-)

C. Moss said...

good lead into the action at the hospital. thanks for sharing. :)
C.R.

Mandy Earles said...

Oh, I love zombie stories! I wonder why there is a crowd. I'm intrigued. Can't wait to read more.

Molly Daniels said...

Thank you everyone:) Wish my muse would return so I could finish SOMETHING.

flossiebentonrogers.com said...

Love zombie stories! Please share more on this one.

Molly Daniels said...

@Kerrianne: I will:) This had a tangle of characters in it. Hopefully I'll be able to straighten everything out in the end, lol:)