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Shane’s
mouth descended on hers again with more intensity than before. Raw emotion took over. The sound of someone clearing their throat
made her remember where they were.
Embarrassed, she pulled away and stood up.
“There
are too many people in my room; let’s go to yours.” She zipped her coat and yanked on her gloves,
avoiding eye contact with the Resident Assistant who stood near them.
“Lynne,
are you sure?” Shane captured one of her
hands to stop her.
“There’s
only one way to find out if this will work.” For more hump day madness, go here. Enjoy!
*****
In Other News....
Heard back from the 500 Festival person:) And wouldn't you know it, as soon as she satisfied my questions and hung up, the brain thought up five more? I'll have to contact her again later today.
In the meantime, I'm out of town until later today. The spouse has a cardiology appointment, and is also hoping to be able to see his chiropractor first. So here's hoping the snow melts quickly!
Have a good day and I'll catch up on the posts when I return.
18 comments:
Oooh, steamy. I wonder what will happen once they're alone ;) Nice hook.
Hopefully they'll have more privacy in his room...
IF WHAT WOULD WORK??? Great hook, Molly!
Ooh, I wonder what will happen next? Great hook.
Ooh, what an intriguing hook. :-)
Sounds like hey are going to have a Hump Day of their own :) Nice excerpt.
Good hook, Molly!
I like a girl who'll go after what she wants...very nice hook!
Quick thinking on her part! I wonder where this will go. Nice job!
I'm surprised he even has to ask, lol. Can't wait to find out if it does work :D
Thank you everyone:)
Hopefully this book will be ready for submission by this fall. I'm still writing it!
@elingregory: ROFLMAO! Love it! "hump day of their own"....
Intriguing. Not your usual pair of co-eds.
steamy and wondering what will go on next. good hook!
They're definitely hot for each other! Will she be able to keep her head on straight? Hmmmm....
Thank you:)
Ooooh... makes me want to read more!! Great hook!
It's about time you posted a near-sex scene! LOL:)
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