Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Hump Day Hook #9



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This is part of a short story I wrote on a dare, entitled Afternoon Delight.  Enjoy:)
“You should have seen the look on your face Mary, when Josh stuck his tongue in your ear.”  Derek laughed as he recalled their playful antics on the diving platform only moments before.

“I wasn’t expecting it; I was trying to keep from flashing everyone. You’re the ones who decided to see how far we could go before that older couple yelled at us.  Between you sucking my tit and Josh nibbling my neck…which one of you had your hand on my ass? And when are you going to get rid of those God-awful Speedos?” Mary shook her head, enjoying the contact of the two men.  Josh’s arm was draped around her neck, while Derek’s palm rested possessively on her right hip.  “You’re still sporting a boner.  What happened to shrinkage?”

“With a hot thing like you around?  It has a mind of its own.  As for the suit, never.  If you’ve got it, flaunt it.  And baby, I’ve got it.  Just like you in that string bikini.  Now Josh, he’s just self-conscious about his package.”

“I am not!  Where did you get that idea?”  Josh yanked his arm away and stopped in his tracks.

20 comments:

Amber Skyze said...

Woo Hoo...Molly going rogue. So will you finish it?

Molly Daniels said...

Not sure. It had to be 1000 words exactly, based on a picture. But I misinterpreted the pic; thought it was 2 guys and 1 girl. Turns out it was two girls and one guy! So wrote another one, but kept this one around to maybe expand on it. At the end, it's a 'will they or won't they' cliffhanger.

diannehartsock said...

Okay, what did he stop for! Definately need more of this story. :)

Jessica Subject said...

Oh, I say keep going! What does Josh do next?

Sandra Sookoo said...

*snort* "What happened to shrinkage?" lol Love it!

Flossie Benton Rogers said...

Playful! Good choice. I like it.

SherryGLoag said...

Hilarious :-)

Lucy Felthouse said...

Great hook, well done!

L VanHorn said...

Sounds like one hot swim meet!

Harlie Reader said...

I really liked it you tease. Going to the dark side now?

Marika

Layna Pimentel said...

LMAO I'm totally rolling after that speedo comment. Great dare, and super awesome snippet!

valloryv said...

I hope you keep going. I'd like to know Josh's response.

Cassandra Dean said...

Oh wow, I would DEFINITELY read more! Great hook :D

Kathleen Grieve said...

Love the playful sexiness in this!

Molly Daniels said...

Thanks for the feedback! Glad I was able to entertain you:)

Molly Daniels said...

@Harlie, this will probably end up being a Kenzie story, if I ever decide to expand it. I'll probably post another snippet of it later.

C. Moss said...

snicker about the speedo. playful. thanks for sharing. :)
C.R.

Molly Daniels said...

Thank you:) Glad you enjoyed it!

Naomi said...

Yummy hook. Very intriguing

Molly Daniels said...

Thanks Naomi:)