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I know I covered this last week, but it bears repeating: Even respectable business men give hickeys! And what I don't get is how she didn't feel the suction.
A few pages later, she asks an innocent question, one that makes him get lost in thought. Instead of probing further, she changes the subject, thinking it's 'something painful' and doesn't want to remind him of it. But two pages earlier, she recalls the psychiatrist's words. Wouldn't she want to probe a little, to speed the healing? Or maybe I'm just the 'probing' type, lol....figuratively speaking, of course!
Eeeeuuuuu....'the fuller the bladder, the more intense the orgasm'? I don't want to lose control and pee all over the bed. This just sounds wrong. And why is she continually 'amazed' by the knowledge of 'Mr. Sexpert'? He's had YEARS of experience, while you only have a few months, idiot!
Pg 53 pulled me out of the story, since I found this hard to imagine. She's 'strolling arm in arm' with C, but yet her hand is tucked into the back pocket of his shorts. If that's the case, then she's either got two left hands, or she's more tucked under his arm. 'Arm in arm' indicates the elbows are linked, with each person's hand crooked back toward their own bodies. Try it. The author needs to either use dolls to try out her walking positions or actually TRY this with another person.
Pg 55: She again makes an innocent observation, but when he stares at her, she wonders if she's overstepped her boundaries? Again, see above paragraph #3....
She goes to his office to seek permission to leave the boat and go shopping. C is on the phone, but asks his caller to hold. She feels like she's in the principal's office, rather than a grown woman making an honest request? Oh wait....the previous day he used handcuffs on her during sex....this is why she feels like a sub or something? Why does this have any bearing on her request? Oh yeah.....she's inexperienced, insecure, and married him too fast, w/o thinking through the whole control issue.....and oh yeah, she shouldn't have to worry about whether or not she can kiss him goodbye! That ring on your finger gives the right, dumbell!
I applaud her for her single act of rebellion, heh heh.....
Yes, you have 3 people with you, for protection! Did you forget already there is someone trying to kill you? Or hold you for ransom?
She returns after shopping and discovers the jig is up; C knows she took the Jet Ski. And her response is 'what the hell was I thinking?'. If you're going to rebel, you don't care about the consequences. A more apt response would be to lift your chin and say 'oh well!' Maybe he'll use the handcuffs on you again....or the flogger. You seem to like that....
Later, during foreplay, he looks down at her and she's alarmed? Why? Is she worried about him making her beg for her pleasure? Thank goodness all goes well....
Later, she's chatting with her friend, who makes a snarky remark. She shuts down the chat so C won't see it? I'm rolling my eyes....if you don't want your friends making snarky remarks, then either don't tell your friends about your sex life, or leave incriminating paperwork laying around where they can find it.
I had to stop reading at this point, and read something more enjoyable. Come back next week for another
The events of October 1983. Band competitions and my Halloween costume:)